[readme] typos, precision & re-phrasing
authorArthur Lutz <arthur.lutz@logilab.fr>
Wed, 24 Apr 2013 15:27:20 +0200
changeset 144 3bdd37e41e73
parent 143 fbb305bc2f56
child 145 ff7a935c3316
[readme] typos, precision & re-phrasing
readme.rst
--- a/readme.rst	Thu May 30 14:03:26 2013 +0200
+++ b/readme.rst	Wed Apr 24 15:27:20 2013 +0200
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
      ami.hg_address_server: http://hg.logilab.org/users/ptonelli/ami_creator/server
 
      ### optionnal (necessary to upload to openstack) ###
-     keystone.user: usearname
+     keystone.user: username
      keystone.password: password
      keystone.tenant: tenant
      keystone.tenant_id: 00000000000000000000000000000000
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 
 This should create and upload an up to date custom AMI image
 
-The first step is to add the salt ppa to install it:
+On Ubuntu, the first step is to add the salt PPA to install it:
 
 .. sourcecode:: bash
   root@machine~# add-apt-repository -y ppa:saltstack/salt
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
 .. sourcecode:: bash
   root@machine~# hg clone http://hg.logilab.org/users/ptonelli/ami_creator/server/ /etc/salt/srv
 
-Copy the necessary scripts to have launch the ami creation process at boot:
+Copy the necessary scripts so the ami creation process is launched at boot:
 
 .. sourcecode:: bash
   root@machine~# cp /etc/salt/srv/others/rc.local /etc/rc.local